I'll give it a low six. The preview pages aren't until halfway through so Tchalla does beat up a few before then. But the HZ dialogue in the field up to that point needs to be removed in the trade. I don't think Ridley made that choice. That was either the artist or editor because it's more menacing without it and doesn't seem like his style.
He does however hang a bunch of lanterns for the sake of story. He points out that these ideas wouldn't normally happen with dialogue.
It's not as bad as it could've been, but it needed to be better too.
Changes I would make
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-Remove "Kill Tchalla", "Death to the King" speech bubbles. They're not LMDs
-Have the lab setup for Shuri by Tchalla as part of a series of fallback bases.
- Have Tchalla say he knows Shuri put a tracker on him and that was part of his contingency.
Ridley may have done these because he feels he made Tchalla sneaky enough with the agents and the unexplained kill switch, but you keep that snowball rolling regardless of how big it gets. Lol
Also, Storm, Shuri, T'chaka, and Ramonda all got thrown under the emotional bus. If the relationship wasn't dead before, it is now. lol. He also made that Marauders issue canon, the only part of which I didn't like was the revised history story.